So, my sister and I, inpatient as we were, decided to play with the new bunnies before we should have. It was a great time, until I accidentally put one of the bunnies into the wrong cage. The cage I accidentally put the bunny is was much higher than the other cages. And my sister or myself could not get the bunny out. So my sister frantically sent me for our mom.
I went running full speed, down the steep hill towards the house, yelling for my mom. Until I gained to much speed and started falling, I rolled down the hill and bumped into our deck.
While my mom was tending to my cuts and bruises, my dad saved the lone bunny.
Oh, just so you know, you spelled inpatient wrong- it's impatient..
ReplyDeleteHaha otherwise I liked your story, I had bunnies as a little kid. They were so much fun.
I like that story. Sounds like that must of hurt though. I like how you built up to falling over.
ReplyDeleteThat's a great memory! I'm sure most everyone has a similar experience from their early childhood. It's one of those moments that has to happen in every little kids life--do something you're not supposed to and then you have to get mom or dad to fix something that went wrong, just like they warned you it would.
ReplyDeleteIt's funny how a lot of these stories are people making some kind of mistake. Maybe that stuff sticks with you more as a child.
ReplyDeleteThat is a great memory. All of my memories with animals are of be being bitten or injured in some way. Some situations, like this one, you can look back and laugh or think of it fondly.
ReplyDeleteGrade: 7.5/10
ReplyDeleteMistakes:
• MN should be Minn.
• Misspelled impatient
• Wrote is instead of in
• Should be neither/nor: And my sister or myself could not get the bunny out.
• Run-on sentence and fragments. Should be: I went running full speed down the steep hill towards the house, yelling for my mom, until I gained to much speed and started falling. I rolled down the hill and bumped into our deck.