Texas man faces multiple drug charges after being found in a closet with a deceased man. The homeowner seen signs of forced entry and found they two men in closet. After being tested it was clear drugs were involved. Clueless homeowner found the two in the closet, one man sleeping the other dead.
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Interesting story. I'd replace the word 'seen' with the word 'saw'. And possibly end that sentence with "and found these two men in a closet." I would also try to revise your last sentence some as well. Good job with the summary.
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ReplyDeleteMistakes:
• The last sentence is a combination of sentence fragments.
• Should be saw not seen